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You’re an amazing writer! Genuinely would have believed this was by a published author. Brilliant sense of atmosphere and just the right length for a little horror story. Were you inspired by the film Weapons at all? I got similar vibes - the child being entranced by something evil (plus terrifying smile) luring them in for their own benefit to take a portion of their innocence and the caregivers around them being put into some sort of stupor. Even the mention of soup haha. It felt a bit like a scene from the same universe!

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Well done 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽. Downright Victorian .

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